Saturday, May 31, 2014

#WIPMarathon Report #4

I'm excited for this check-in because I actually have a tiny bit of progress to report! Plus, starting today, I am officially on summer break. This should mean more writing. *Should* being the keyword here, given that I can already see a slew of potential distracters. Like this:



(You may have figured out that this was just my shameless excuse to squeeze in another picture of my pool. Subtle, right?). But seriously, I'm hoping June is the month where I sprint to the finish line. Okay, so the month of May--this'll be short and sweet:

Last report word count + chapter count/scene count: 86,801 - 26 chapters completed
Current report WC + CC/ SC: 90,536 - 27 chapters completed
WIP Issues This Month: Now that I'm inching my way closer to the end, I'm worried about...well...the end. I'm worried that my book's conclusion will be too cliche. And there is one loose end I'm having a really hard time tying up, and if I don't figure it out, it's really going to tick off my readers. Also, I'm getting quite desperate for a title. "Spiraling" doesn't do it for me, but anything else I choose has already been used by two or three other authors. I finally forced myself to set this issue aside when @boundiali, who has become my sounding board for all of my writing-related whining, assured me that he would help me come up with a good title. 
What I learned this month in writing: A wealth of information about self-publishing! I won't repeat all of that here since this recent post gives more details.
What distracted me this month while writing: May is our last month of school. I was wading in so much work this week that there were nights we were eating canned olives and beans for dinner.

Goal for next month: I can't believe I'm finally going to say this, but my goal for next month is to finish my book.  

Last 200 words:
And then there was Lynn. Stryder wondered if death was one of those unchangeable things, like the Hawk Eyes book that insisted on dropping in every single timeline. The details of how it dropped were allowed to change, but no matter what, that book was destined to hit the floor. Perhaps death was the same way. The who was going to die and the how they were going to die might change, but maybe death was fixed, and Time was going to serve it to someone, no matter what. Maybe he and Taz could loop back to Mel’s Diner a dozen times, and no matter what, someone was going to die. 
What if next time, that someone was Taz?
He shuddered, but then realized it was a pointless thought. He wasn’t looping back again. This was his reality now. Last month he was a basketball star. A “ladies man.” Popular. Now, he was a convict.
Suddenly a familiar heat tingled his skin.
What?
The room started to pull away from him, and he grabbed the mattress with all his might.
“No!” he shouted out loud. He had done everything he could. He had confessed his crime. He had let Taz go when he selfishly wanted to hold onto her. He had owned up to his mistakes. He was serving his time. He was making things right. What else did the Laws want?

“Damn it, no…!”

23 comments:

  1. Wha--?! Can't wait to read this! So many twists and turns. Whew!

    I feel the same way about my title. Oh I changed it from The Sphera of The Twelfth to The Sphere of The Twelfth, but it still sounds so...I dunno.

    Brainstorming solves everything, so just give it some time and you'd come up with the solutions to all the loose ends.

    Really hoping you get to finish in June, so I'll feel fulfilled through you <3
    Good luck!

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    1. I almost sent you chapter 27, but then decided I needed to get chapter 28 written first. Only because I know I'll go back and change/tweak things from the prior chapter to make it consistent with the new one.

      The Sphere of the Twelfth sounds very epic-fantasy-ish. Without having read your novel (*sits on hands to keep from impatiently tapping fingers*), I can't tell if it's a good fit or not. But the fact that you're saying "...I dunno" is probably not the best sign. It's hard to come up with ONE big idea that somehow captures the essence of your entire book, right?

      Thanks for cheering me on for the month of June. Still wish we were crossing that finish line together. ;)

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  2. The progress on your pool is awesome, Jodi. It's getting done so fast! When my folks had their pool installed it took almost all summer.

    The progress on your book, also awesome. Roughly 4k words is nothing to balk at and I loved your snippet. I can't wait to read the whole thing!!

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    1. I really adore our pool company. They are not only friendly and cooperative, but fast, which is saying a lot given the horror stories I've heard from others who have installed pools. Though we still have a ways to go, and I suppose anything can happen. *knock on wood*

      I am so glad you want to read it! As soon as it's finished and I go through initial edits, I'll be needing some beta readers. I'd love to send it to you, if you're willing.

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    2. I am definitely willing!! Please do. I can't wait to read it!!

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  3. Wow! Just wow! I am so excited to read this book! You never cease to amaze Jojo!

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    1. Thank you for keeping me so pumped up about it, Jewls! I am so excited for you to read it. Just a little longer...I hope...

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  4. Pool!!! ^_^
    I always have titles woes, too. I realized earlier this week that my working title no longer fits the story. *le sigh!* I'm going to have to catch up on your posts. I've missed so much! I've been in a writing fog all week. About that post though, my only thought is GO FOR IT! I mean, I'm scared to death, but if I see you do it, it might help me, you know. ^_^

    Dude! The ending to that excerpt is awesome!

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    1. Writing fogs are the best Krystal! I got in one last night and ended up writing until 4 a.m. It's probably all crap (haha), but man did it feel good to get lost in a flurry of writing like that. Still waiting for that week-long one to hit though. Yikes, my kids might very possibly starve.

      How sweet of you to say my finishing might help you, when it was your word count last night that got me all fueled!

      Thanks for your feedback on my excerpt. :-D

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  5. Great work! And congratulations on seeing the end in sight! That's an exciting and scary feeling. Keep it up and let's have a pool party when you're done. ;)

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    1. Thank you Cat! It is scary. I know I'm going to be like, "Okay, I've finished a book. NOW WHAT?"

      Yes, I think a pool party is definitely a must for all us marathoners who desperately need to cool off. ;-D

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  6. I skipped right to your excerpt--it's seriously awesome. Congratulations on the progress! May your summer be filled with lots more writing and fewer canned olives and beans. ;-)
    -Amanda Shayne

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    1. Thank you Amanda! *ridiculous grin* And my kids appreciate your well-wishes for fewer olives and beans.

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  7. Wow, 90k! That's epic.

    Really nice excerpt - leaves me wanting to read more!

    Good luck in June - hope you can figure out that loose thread and finish your novel! :D

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    1. Thank you, Suzanne! My original goal was 75K, so I'm at the point where I'm cringing every time I write another thousand words. I think the real epic feat will be getting this thing cut down to a decent word count.

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  8. I got chills when I read that you are hoping to finish your novel next month! Hurry! Hurry! Not only am I SO excited to read the whole thing, I am ready to sell the shit outta it!
    The pool is looking so good!

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    1. Thank you Shan! I'm so glad to have you advocating for this thing. Not to mention I'm a writer, NOT a salesperson, so I'll need all the help I can get. And THANK YOU for helping me to brainstorm my title!

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  9. By the way, this scene is amazing. It leaves me desperate to read more.

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    1. Ooh, I'm glad my little 238 words draws you in! I hope the rest of the book measures up.

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  10. That pool looks like it's going to be amazing!! And possibly lead to even more distractions when it's filled ;) But those are all good.

    I totally dig the line, "maybe death was fixed, and Time was going to serve it to someone, no matter what." I completely cannot wait to read this. Talk about a cliffhanger!!

    And I don't know about canned, but I've been known to sit down with a jar of pimento-stuffed olives and go through them like nobody's business ;) Best of luck on this goal -- you can do it!!

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    1. Haha Cheyenne, I'm hoping that this pool isn't a death-sentence for my [very] short-lived writing career. But to be fair, I live in the desert, and even writers get hot--and not the good kind of hot. ;)

      Thanks for your feedback on my little book chunk. I like that same line too, because it's plain English, but with a touch of personification to add a little umph, or...whatever. I just like it.

      Only you would figure out a way to add some elegance to my olives. ;)

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